Please help about my story!?

i dunno... you're story's kinda awesome... but i suggest the outcome of the story is up to you. you are the author, after all. just write anything that you think of, then edit it if you want, check and recheck what you wrote. don't be worried if you have writer's block - the next part's gonna come to you eventually. the important part is you enjoy what you are writing, and that's all that counts.